Imagine that you are doing a project on the most popular Valentine's Day presents in Zetland. You have found some data on the subject - the results of the opinion polls (see the table below). The most popular Valentine's Day presents Flowers Number of respondents (%) 37 Sweets Perfume Tickets to the cinema or theatre Gift certificates 25 20 10 8 Write 200-250 words. - make an opening statement on the subject of the project; - select and report 2-3 facts; - make 1-2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments; - outline a problem that can arise with choosing a present and suggest a may of solving it; conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the best present for Valentine', Day.
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It is well known that gifts play an important role in our life.
Also
it is a great opportunity to pay attention and take care Add a comma
Also,
about
your loved ones. I am doing a project on the most popular Valentine’s Day presents in Zetland. I am going to analyze the results of the opinion poll in the table and give my opinion.
Looking at the main features of the table, I must say that the most popular presents are flowers and sweets (37% and 25% Change preposition
of
correspondingly
). Replace the word
respectively
Om
the contrary, the least favoured present among respondents Correct your spelling
On
are
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is
gift
certificates which stands
at only 8%.
Looking at the details, it can be seen that perfume (20%) is 2 times Correct subject-verb agreement
stand
popular
than tickets to the cinema or theatre (10%). It is no Correct quantifier usage
more popular
surprising
as most people would rather groom themselves than go to the movies or theatres.
One problem people can face when choosing a present is a high price. To solve Replace the word
surprise
this
problem it is neccesary
to choose the Correct your spelling
necessary
gift
that you can afford and plan the budget in advance.
In conclusion, I believe that the best present for Valentine’s Day is a gift
in which you put your love care and attention. Such
a gift
will be remembered for the rest of life
.Correct pronoun usage
my life
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gift with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "presents" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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