Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.

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Certainly, there are many different
sports
all around the
world
, and the interest
of
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games among
people
have
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become increased.
However
, Some
people
believe that not all
sports
are entertaining and safe for physical well-being, but
still
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due to
craziness, some individuals take part in dangerous
sports
. In
this
essay, I will explain why
people
prefer challenging
sports
over others, and suggest the possible solution that might be taken to deal with
this
complex matter. There are numerous games which are dangerous for physical well-being.
Firstly
,
cricket
is the most famous sport all around the
world
, loved by all age groups
people
. In
cricket
, the hard ball is made up of leather,
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for
the
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bowling. The ball is too strong, it can break the bones of batsmen easily. In 2002,
for instance
, the Australian cricketer, Phillip Hughes died during
test
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match, because
ball
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the ball
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hit
head
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their head
his head
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badly.
However
, the doctor called for his death immediately.
Although
It’s a dangerous game,
people
are still die-heart
fan
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fans
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of
cricket
. The attraction to dangerous
sports
can be attributed to various factors,
such
as
the
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social pressure, and the allure of pushing personal limits. Despite the risks involved, individuals are drawn to the adrenaline rush and sense of achievement that comes with participating in
such
sports
.
Secondly
, football is
also
the most popular game all around the
world
, including 11
players
. In football,
players
often sustain injuries
while
attempting to score goals
due to
collisions with each other. But whenever
,
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the FIFA
World
Cup
held
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is held
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, all individuals around the
world
moves
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to the hosted country and enjoy
to watch
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watching
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the live matches with their loved ones. In order to resolve these issues. The
sport
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sports
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federation is working continuously to
safe
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save
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a life of the athletes, who are playing for their beloved country.
However
, the
cricket
administrative body called the International
Cricket
Council
ensure
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ensures
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that all
players
have
the
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safety
essential
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essentials
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, like elbow and knee
pad
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pads
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, and
made
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the helmet compulsory for the
betsmen
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batsmen
batsman
, even
the
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bowler is a spinner.
On the other hand
, the coach of football must ensure that the
players
are hydrated and are fully equipped with
essentials
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essential
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items. Cooling down and stretching
is
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are
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also
important for
a
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players
a player
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players
to avoid
heat-up
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the heat-up
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situation
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situations
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with their opponents. In conclusion, despite the dangers of some
sports
,
people
are loving
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it
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them
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and
passionate
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are passionate
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to become
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about becoming
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the
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part of their favourite teams.
However
, the
sports
federation
need
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needs
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to ensure that all
players
are safe during the match, and
they
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that they
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are hydrated and fully equipped with
essentials
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essential
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items, which protect their
body
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bodies
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from injuries.
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