Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.

Certainly, there are many different

sports

all around the

world

, and the interest

of

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games among

people

have

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become increased.

However

, Some

people

believe that not all

sports

are entertaining and safe for physical well-being, but

still

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due to

craziness, some individuals take part in dangerous

sports

. In

this

essay, I will explain why

people

prefer challenging

sports

over others, and suggest the possible solution that might be taken to deal with

this

complex matter. There are numerous games which are dangerous for physical well-being.

Firstly

,

cricket

is the most famous sport all around the

world

, loved by all age groups

people

. In

cricket

, the hard ball is made up of leather,

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for

the

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bowling. The ball is too strong, it can break the bones of batsmen easily. In 2002,

for instance

, the Australian cricketer, Phillip Hughes died during

test

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match, because

ball

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the ball

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hit

head

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their head

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badly.

However

, the doctor called for his death immediately.

Although

It’s a dangerous game,

people

are still die-heart

fan

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of

cricket

. The attraction to dangerous

sports

can be attributed to various factors,

such

as

the

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social pressure, and the allure of pushing personal limits. Despite the risks involved, individuals are drawn to the adrenaline rush and sense of achievement that comes with participating in

such

sports

.

Secondly

, football is

also

the most popular game all around the

world

, including 11

players

. In football,

players

often sustain injuries

while

attempting to score goals

due to

collisions with each other. But whenever

,

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the FIFA

World

Cup

held

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, all individuals around the

world

moves

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to the hosted country and enjoy

to watch

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the live matches with their loved ones. In order to resolve these issues. The

sport

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federation is working continuously to

safe

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a life of the athletes, who are playing for their beloved country.

However

, the

cricket

administrative body called the International

Cricket

Council

ensure

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that all

players

have

the

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safety

essential

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, like elbow and knee

pad

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, and

made

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the helmet compulsory for the

betsmen

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batsmen

batsman

, even

the

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bowler is a spinner.

On the other hand

, the coach of football must ensure that the

players

are hydrated and are fully equipped with

essentials

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items. Cooling down and stretching

is

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also

important for

a

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players

a player

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players

to avoid

heat-up

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situation

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with their opponents. In conclusion, despite the dangers of some

sports

,

people

are loving

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it

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and

passionate

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to become

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the

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part of their favourite teams.

However

, the

sports

federation

need

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to ensure that all

players

are safe during the match, and

they

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that they

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are hydrated and fully equipped with

essentials

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items, which protect their

body

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from injuries.