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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learn foreign languages is waste of time. To what extend agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time
Some
people
 think that as
computers
 translate quickly and accurately,
that is
 why, learn foreign languages is waste of time. Now I am going to discuss
this
 essay. On the
one
 hand, I totally dis agree with
this
 situation. We have to learn at least
one
 extra
language
. It will help someday to
people
.
For instance
: If you know English
language
 and you will never come across with any difficulties. Nowadays, English
language
 is world
language
, most
people
 can speak that
language
, almost 80%
people
. It is true
computers
 translate quickly than
people
nevertheless
 we can not always carry a computer or different kind of gadgets with ourself.
For example
: what we are going to if our gadgets runs out of charge in the abroad, how we explain that if we want to say something.
On the other hand
, some
people
 say that we don not have to learn other languages.
Such
 as: if we need translate something we can use
computers
 or gadgets, it is a easy way. If you go to the abroad, you can explain what you want with gadget or
computers
. In conclusion, like I said we have to learn at least
one
language
. It will help us
one
 day.
Also
 we can teach that
language
 to our children or family members.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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