As computers translate quickly and accurately, learn foreign languages is waste of time. To what extend agree or disagree?
Some
people
think that as computers
translate quickly and accurately, that is
why, learn foreign languages is waste of time. Now I am going to discuss this
essay.
On the one
hand, I totally dis agree with this
situation. We have to learn at least one
extra language
. It will help someday to people
. For instance
: If you know English language
and you will never come across with any difficulties. Nowadays, English language
is world language
, most people
can speak that language
, almost 80% people
. It is true computers
translate quickly than people
nevertheless
we can not always carry a computer or different kind of gadgets with ourself. For example
: what we are going to if our gadgets runs out of charge in the abroad, how we explain that if we want to say something.
On the other hand
, some people
say that we don not have to learn other languages. Such
as: if we need translate something we can use computers
or gadgets, it is a easy way. If you go to the abroad, you can explain what you want with gadget or computers
.
In conclusion, like I said we have to learn at least one
language
. It will help us one
day. Also
we can teach that language
to our children or family members.Submitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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