The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar chart illustrates the average cost of
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
in
five
various cities from 1990 to 2002 in comparison to prices in 1989.
Overall
, it can be seen that in the first
five
years
of the given period, three cities namely,
Tokyo
, London, and New York witnessed a decrease in the price of houses,
while
in the following
five
years
, only
Tokyo
experienced a decline. In detail,
in
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from
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1990 to 1995,
Farnkfurt
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Frankfurt
and Madrid generally witnessed an upward
around
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of around
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3%,
while
Tokyo
and London declined more than 5 per cent. In the meantime,
the
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apply
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accomodation
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accommodation
prices decreased
5
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by 5
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% in New York. In the following
five
years
, compared to the
last
five
years
,
cost
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the cost
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of places in New York increased 10%, which raised to 5% more expensive than in 1989.
Furthermore
, the UK average price of houses rose sharply to 10%;
however
,
Tokyo
accomodation
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accommodation
costs remained 5% cheaper
as
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than
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it was in 1989.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words five, years, tokyo with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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