The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.
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The table illustrates how unemployed British
men
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and
women
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spent their leisure
time
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in fourteen different
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in the
last
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year.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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both genders utilized their spare
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by doing housework, shopping and job hunting in the morning
while
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spending less
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on sports
activities
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and
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drinking.
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, in the morning, the highest proportion of
women
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did the housework.
last
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year, during the day, 70% of
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were engaged with the house chores
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while
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only 27% of
men
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did the housework.
on the other hand
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, approximately, 26% and 16% of
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preferred shopping and job hunting in the morning
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the figure decreased slightly in the afternoon.
however
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,
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showed a similar interest, they did the same
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in the morning rather
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than the
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afternoon.
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,
men
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showed greater interest towards gardening, walking and playing sports.
In contrast
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, approximately 5% of unemployed
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spent their
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drinking in the daytime
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only 2% of
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engaged in
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activity.
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, a zero per cent ratio was recorded for
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, who do not stay in bed or play any sports in the afternoon.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, last, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, time, activities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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