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Many countries have embraced tourism as a way to boost their economies and create local jobs for local residents. Some argue that tourism can have negative impacts on the environment and cultures. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism for a country?

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A lot of countries have embraced
tourism
 as a way to increase their economies and create work for citizens.
Although
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, many
argues
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 that
tourism
 can have negative impacts on
the
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apply
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nature and local cultures. On the one hand, some
people
 think it is
very
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a very
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 useful way to increase our
culture
. Because the boost of
culture
 is good for us, all these serve for
modernazition
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modernization
. To explain, at the same time,
tourism
 is very helpful
for
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in
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 creating jobs for the unemployed population. The boost of
tourism
 affects not only
increase
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an increase
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 of
works
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work
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 and
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the culturalizition
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culturalizition
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gutturalization
 of the environment.
As a result
,
prosperity
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the prosperity
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 of our country will
raise
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rise
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it
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.
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, an Uzbek senator recently expressed positive thoughts about to arrival of
tourism
On the other hand
, many
people
 opinion, the introduction of
tourism
 has a negative impact on
people
's ecology and our cultures. As our nationality will disappear, if we come
instead
 of free work we can do without
tourism
. To explain, the influx of
tourism
 leads to the loss of the environment and
culture
.
As a result
, we are only engaged in
tourism
.
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, 50% of the world's population does not consider to be environmentally negative and only believes that,
therefore
 they are not national In
conlusion
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conclusion
, many countries have embraced
tourism
 as a way to boost their economies and their work for
people
.
Although
 a lot of argues that
tourism
 can have not positive impacts on
the
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nature and local
culture
.
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