The graph illustrates the amount of visitors in Europan areas ( coast, mountains and lakes) from 1987 to 2007.

The graph illustrates the amount of visitors in Europan areas ( coast, mountains and lakes) from 1987 to 2007.
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The graph illustrates how many tourists visited three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Units are measured in thousands.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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all places experienced an upward trend,except the lakes
at the end
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of the given period.
Moreover
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, only the popularity of mountains had an average increase. In terms of visitors attraction with the highest level was the coast.Starting with 40
thousand
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tourists,it saw a slight fall of around 5
thousand
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.
However
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, following years it increased substantially to 70
thousand
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at the end
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of the year. Regarding other areas, the mountains in terms of popularity were the second at the beginning of the period with 20
thousand
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.By subsequent it witnessed a gradual climb by 10
thousand
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tourists.
Whereas
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with the lowest start were the lakes, which increased rapidly by reaching their peak at 75
thousand
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and overtook the coast in 2002. Unfortunately, there was a gradual decrease to 40
thousand
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in 2007.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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