The graph illustrates the amount of visitors in Europan areas ( coast, mountains and lakes) from 1987 to 2007.
The graph illustrates how many tourists visited three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Units are measured in thousands.
Overall
, it is clear that
all places experienced an upward trend,except the lakes at the end
of the given period.Moreover
, only the popularity of mountains had an average increase.
In terms of visitors attraction with the highest level was the coast.Starting with 40 thousand
tourists,it saw a slight fall of around 5 thousand
.However
, following years it increased substantially to 70 thousand
at the end
of the year.
Regarding other areas, the mountains in terms of popularity were the second at the beginning of the period with 20 thousand
.By subsequent it witnessed a gradual climb by 10 thousand
tourists.Whereas
with the lowest start were the lakes, which increased rapidly by reaching their peak at 75 thousand
and overtook the coast in 2002. Unfortunately, there was a gradual decrease to 40 thousand
in 2007.Submitted by ikromovavazbek01 on
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