The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows how the unemployed spent their day in the British previous year.
According to
the table, men
and women
have a high proportion in three actions (housework, shopping, and job hunting). For instance
, 49% of women
go shopping and about 19% of men
are interested in shopping in the morning, from one point of view both males and females are not popular in spending their moment in
drinking, playing sports, visiting town and other mentioned activities. Change preposition
apply
For example
, almost all men
and women
have the same share in drinking.
on the other hand
, there are some other activities like walking, decorating, gardening, staying in bed, and visiting relatives that both genders have their own shares. Men
are more interested in gardening and walking while
women
are fun of visiting relatives or friends and watching TV programs.
Overall
, the chart illustrates the proportion of how unemployed spent their time in the UK last
year. Both men
and women
spent more time on housing and few time in activities like drinking and playing sports.Submitted by hassanrasuli52 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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