You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
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The diagram demonstrates the process of recycling organic waste to garden compost.
Overall
,
this
includes 5 stages, each of which goes in a plastic container of 2m in volume. It is notable that the fourth stage lasts for six months.
To begin
with, the first phase is organised by setting the empty bottle with four holes for air circulation. At the second point, food, grass and newspaper are laid on the bottom one by one in a specific order. Each layer of those is required to be 15 cm high. Granules of nitrogen and water are added to the waste in the third stage. It is crucial to mention that hot water only must be poured in. After having these manipulations done, the container is tightly covered and the following and the longest stage is ready to start.
This
includes heating everything in a plastic bottle for six months. When
this
process, the waste evaporates through the openings.
After
this
period, mass is considered to be prepared and ready to be used as fertilizer in the garden.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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