Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

It is widely argued that many

offenders

would become engaged to re-offend after releasing back to

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society

. Personally, I believe that holding the prisoners in captivity should not be considered as the rehabilitation process and that’s why, most of them are feasible to recommit

crimes

as soon as getting back to the

society

. In the following essay, I will state my reasons and the significant impacts on

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society

.

To begin

with, criminals had to rub shoulders with other

offenders

while

they were in prison. They had enough time to teach each other a wide range of committing

crimes

.

For instance

, many addictive products,

such

as tobacco can be produced

at

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residential areas by the public. These producers can be arrested and sent to

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prison by the police.

Therefore

, they can teach other inmates how to create tobacco or other addictive products.

In addition

, many criminals strive to find a job or have a source of income

while

they

release

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back

to

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society

.

However

, checking the candidate’s criminal record is one of the most significant

priority

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to get a nine-to-five job in each

society

.

This

often leads to

commit

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crimes

again

due to

various failures from

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society

. Reoffending and committing the

crimes

as soon as

releasing

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back to the

society

could have dramatic impacts on the

society

. One major effect is that many criminals

could not

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try to be

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responsible citizens as they fail to find a prosperous job.

In other words

, some of them will remain as law-abiding citizens who encourage susceptible individuals to be bonded with. All things considered, being in contact with inmates at the prison and

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to pass the criminal record would make the previous

offenders

to

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commit

crimes

again

due to

providing a source of income. That’s why, the previous

offenders

would not make an attempt to be

a

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productive

member

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of

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society

which could be impacted negatively.