the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site summerise the infotmation by selecting and reporsting the main features and make comparision when relevant
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The maps illustrate a current Norbition industrial area
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and a proposed plan for the future.
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Overal
, significant changes will include the introduction of entertainment facilities, healthcare, and a school. Correct your spelling
Overall
Additionally
, factories will be replaced with housing zones which will have access to new main roads.
Looking at the present plan, the north side was covered with farmland stretching along the river. Linking Words
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, a main road on the south side is connected with a roundabout leading to another road, providing access to houses.
In the future plan, the shops will be established from the Linking Words
south west
of the main roundabout, just below another new line with accommodations around. On the east side, a playground and a school will be placed near houses. Correct your spelling
southwest
Moreover
, for health services, people will be able to attend a medical centre situated just next to the additional roundabout which is considerably smaller than the main one.Linking Words
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