Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what exten do you argee or disagree?

The public

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that specific careers are suitable for each gender

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in their physics and mental. In my opinion, I totally disagree with

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view because of the growth of education and expansion of the

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market for both males and females. Nowadays,

men

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and

women

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are equally capable

for

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doing any

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. The

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market has changed considerably. There are

not any

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specific rules for occupational compatibility regarding gender. It can easily

recognize

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that successful politicians and businesswomen like Mr.Nguyen Thi Phuong Thao who is the CEO of Vietjet Air or Taylor Swift who is

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influencer for thousands of young people. These

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are showing that they can lead,

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be professional and have crucial social

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as

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which is

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plain proof against the belief of gender-specific career

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.

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, the

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in education have allowed both

gender

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can have equal opportunities to learn and develop themselves in their own way. Some nations in

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like England or Finland give

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of scholarship

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scholarship

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scholarships

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and chances for

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to acquire knowledge and access

qualification

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qualifications

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as same as

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.

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, some

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are growing

to

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taking

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excellent responsibilities for household chores and childcare which is

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a substantial evidence

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to

broke

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down traditional

boundary

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for

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. In conclusion, the disparities in the type of

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compatible for males or females still appear up to now. I still believe that

men

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and

women

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can work in

variety

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of

field

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and express themselves equally.