The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries  from 1990 to 2012
The chart indicates information on the share of 4 countries in Australian exports between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, China's share has grown rapidly in the period of 22 years
while
the numbers for both the US and India have fluctuated.
Lastly
, total exports to Japan had a downtrend and stayed stable afterwards. As can be observed, Japan went from almost 30 to below 20 per cent from 1990 to 1995 and remained the same in the following years.
Nonetheless
, the percentage of exports to China started at less than 10% to above it in 2005 and continued to reach almost 30 per cent from 2010 until 2012.
Moreover
, India's statistics show that it stayed stable in the first 10 years and started increasing just before 2005 and reached its all-time high in 2010 at almost 10%.
Finally
,the numbers for material sent to the US started as slightly over 10 in 1990 to less in 1995 and got back at the first place in the year 2000.
Nevertheless
, it decreased modestly to reach less than 10% in 2005.
However
, in the year 2010, it started an uptrend which continued until 2012.
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