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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented line graph indicates information about the number of US
households
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 by annual revenue from 2007 to 2011 and 2015. The unit measurement is in millions.
Overall
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, it can be seen that people who earned 100k USD or more experienced the most fluctuation rather than
rest
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the rest
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 of them. Moving to more
detailed
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detail
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, it is considerable that families who earned between 25k and 49k dollars had a small gap in these periods with families who earned 25,000 dollars or below. Both of these charts
has
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have
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 stayed between 25-30
million
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 during these 3 periods and both of their pick levels were in 2011.
According to
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 the demonstrated information,
population
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the population
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 of families with 50,000 to 74.999 USD has steadily stayed
on
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at
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 20
million
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.
Whereas
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,
number
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the number
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 of
households
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 with 75,000 to 99,999 USD has slightly fluctuated from 2007 to 2015.
Population
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The population
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 of
households
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 with the highest revenue increased from 28
million
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 in 2007 to 33
million
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. As you can see, the highest amount of
households
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belongs
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belong
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 to these people who can earn much more than
rest
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the rest
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 of them.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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