The chart below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.
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the Change the verb form
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balances
of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised several Fix the agreement mistake
balance
countries
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the
period between 1980 to 1990.
In general, what stands out from the chart is thatChange preposition
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countries
significantly improved Use synonyms
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swiftly increased to average years of schooling.
Looking at the details, in spending on research and development industrialised Use synonyms
countries
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twice
as many developing Add a missing verb
were twice
countries
in 1980 but industrialised dramatically grew Use synonyms
almost
400 in 1990. Change preposition
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, scientists and technical per 1000 people, industrialised Linking Words
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tripple
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triple
countries
in 1980. After that, developing Use synonyms
countries
were under 20 and industrialised Use synonyms
countries
were above 60.
With regards to, average years of schooling, industrialised Use synonyms
countries
and developing Use synonyms
countries
, the former considerably climbed above 8 in 1980, improved above 10 in 1990. Use synonyms
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the latter were above 2 in 1980 and were almost 4 in 1990, Linking Words
average
years of schooling Change preposition
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developing
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in developing
countries
much more than scientists and technical and spending on research.Use synonyms
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