You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your fillings about the dinner. In your letter, you should include: Say what you enjoyed at the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his family to your place

Dear
roben
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robin
Robyn
, I hope you and your family are all well. It was
such
a great time
last
night seeing you and your family after so many years. I always knew that you were like a brother to me and
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am really
thanksful
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thankful
.
Last
night was one of the best nights o have ever had.
i
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really
enjoy
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that you invited me to your house for dinner and
you
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and your
family
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hospitality was
undescripable
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indescribable
undescribable
. I really appreciate
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you and
specialy
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especially
from
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your
wife for the delicious dinner you
have
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mad
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made
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. Seeing you and
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specifically
your mother and father was really nice which made me feel like
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am
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in my home.
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feel comfortable talking to them and
listended
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listening
to their
advices
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advice
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for my future life.
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your sister and
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were
at
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the same age so we could talk to each other confide sith ourselves and
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toghether
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together
.
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feel
you
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sister is like my sister which
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have never had.
Finaly
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Finally
,
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want to invite you and your family to my garden after
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come back from my journey next week and
make
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a great time with each other. looking forward to seeing you next weekend. Best regards, Khashayar
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structure
Consider improving the structure of your paragraphs to enhance clarity. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, clearly introduced with a topic sentence and followed by supporting sentences.
grammar spelling
Focus on accurate spelling and proper grammar. Errors in spelling and grammar can detract from the quality of your letter. For example, correct 'fillings' to 'feelings', 'thanksful' to 'thankful', 'o' to 'I', 'undescripable' to 'indescribable', 'mad' to 'made', 'yout' to 'your', 'sith' to 'with', and 'toghether' to 'together'.
vocabulary
Enhance your letter by varying your sentence structures and using a range of vocabulary to express yourself more effectively and engagingly.
punctuation
Pay closer attention to punctuation, especially the use of commas and periods, to improve the readability of your text.
coherence
Although the emotional tone is well conveyed and the letter is generally cohesive, working on smoother transitions between ideas and maintaining a consistent verb tense throughout could further improve your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • heartwarming experience
  • culinary delights
  • familial warmth
  • cordial atmosphere
  • intriguing conversations
  • reciprocal invitation
  • cultural exchange
  • personable interactions
  • memorable hospitality
  • fostering connections
  • warm welcome
  • thoughtful gestures
  • engaging discussions
  • positive impact
  • strengthen the bond
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