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Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do

#friend #children #house #weekend #arrangement #time
Dear Sheela, It was nice to hear from you
,
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 since we
last
 met at your birthday party. It is my pleasure to have Roy and Sheena at my place on the weekend as they are fun to spend
time
 with them. As I don't have any plans for the weekend, I will be happy to spend quality
time
 with the kids. It has been a long
time
 since I have seen them and my kids would love to play with them. You don't have to worry about their daily routine, I will make sure they go to bed on
time
 and have healthy food. Any
time
 of the day would be suitable because I will be at home
whole
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 weekend.
However
, give me a call before you arrive, just in case I am away from home. Make sure that they have their medicines or multivitamins if they are taking any. I have planned everything in advance once they get here. On Saturday, we will have
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supper in my backyard
while
 playing football.
Furthermore
, we will go to a game zone located downtown where will spend our entire Sunday playing video games. And
at the end
, we will go to a restaurant for dinner. Hoping to see you soon. Best regards, Loud.
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Task Response
Consider adding a brief introductory statement mentioning the arrangement directly.
Task Response
You might want to mention any necessary preparations or items to bring for the children in more detail.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear and friendly greeting and closing, which create a warm and inviting tone.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ideas are well-organized and each paragraph communicates a distinct aspect of the visit.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is very suitable for the context, reflecting friendliness and enthusiasm.
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