You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
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do no
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apply
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people's
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animals
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tests
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reasons
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reason
some thing
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something
humans body
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human bodies
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Logical Structure
Focus on providing a clear introduction and conclusion to better frame your argument. This structure helps the reader understand your main points and summarizing thoughts.
Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea and use transition words to link your ideas smoothly.
Complete Response
Address the essay prompt more directly by discussing alternatives to animal testing as mentioned in the topic. Provide a balanced view or a clear justification for your stance.
Clear Comprehensive Ideas
Clarify your ideas by developing each point with more detail and depth. Aim to explain why you hold certain views with clearer reasoning and evidence.
Relevant Specific Examples
Incorporate specific, real-world examples to support your arguments. This could involve mentioning scientific studies or statistics related to animal experimentation.