The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according

to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
The table clarifies level standards for
Canada
,
Japan
,
Peru
and
Zaire
.
This
study was published by the United Nations in 1994.
Overall
, we notice from the context decreased the individual income in
Zaire
,
in contrast
, it increased in
Canada
and
Japan
.
Whereas
, the people in
Peru
enjoyed ordinary situations.
According to
research, the fund's individual in
Japan
is huge compared with other countries
whereas
the profit per person in
Peru
and
Zaire
is lower. Indeed, the life expectancy at birth in four countries is closed, it ranged between 76,78,51 and 47 respectively.
Moreover
, the daily calorie supply per person varies in the four states. Extremely, the fats which are consumed in
Canada
double the fats consumed in
Zaire
,
while
the proportion of calories in
Japan
and
Peru
is reasonable.
Finally
, the adult literacy rate in
Canada
and
Japan
is 99 , in
Peru
is 68 and in
Zaire
is
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