The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
The table clarifies level standards for
Canada
, Japan
, Peru
and Zaire
. This
study was published by the United Nations in 1994.
Overall
, we notice from the context decreased the individual income in Zaire
, in contrast
, it increased in Canada
and Japan
. Whereas
, the people in Peru
enjoyed ordinary situations.
According to
research, the fund's individual in Japan
is huge compared with other countries whereas
the profit per person in Peru
and Zaire
is lower. Indeed, the life expectancy at birth in four countries is closed, it ranged between 76,78,51 and 47 respectively.
Moreover
, the daily calorie supply per person varies in the four states. Extremely, the fats which are consumed in Canada
double the fats consumed in Zaire
, while
the proportion of calories in Japan
and Peru
is reasonable. Finally
, the adult literacy rate in Canada
and Japan
is 99 , in Peru
is 68 and in Zaire
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