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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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These pie charts indicate probable
population
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 changes
on
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in
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 the different ages of
people
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 between 2000 and 2050 in Italy and
Yemen
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. In
Yemen
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, in 2000, 46,3
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percent
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per cent
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 of
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population
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the population
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arised
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arise
raised
arose
 from 15-59
years
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 old
people
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.
Projection
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A projection
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 of
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Yemen
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Yemen's
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population
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 shows that the
percentage
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 of
people
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- who are 15-59
years
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old-will
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old will
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increase
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 to 57.3
percent
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.
People
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- who
over
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are over
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 60
years
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 old- had a slight
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percent
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in
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of
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 the
population
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 in
Yemen
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,in 2000. ( 3.6% ).
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,
pie
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a pie
the pie
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 chart
of
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for
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 2050 illustrates that there will be
slight
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a slight
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increase
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 during the period 2000 to 2050. Half of the
population
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arised
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arose
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 from 0-14
years
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 old humans in 2000.
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,there will be numerous
decrease
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decreases
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 between 2000 and 2050. In Italy,61,6
percent
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 of
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population
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the population
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consisted
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 of 15-
59
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59-year-old
years
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 old citizens.
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, there will significant
fell
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 over the
50 year
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50-year
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 period. ( From 61,6 to 46,2 ) The
percentage
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 of 60+
years
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 old
people
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were
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was
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less
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apply
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lower than quarter, in 2000. (24.1%)
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, the
percentage
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 of 60+
years
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 old
people
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 will
increase
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 by 18.2%. In 2000, 0-14
years
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 old
people
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 were
small
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a small
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 part of
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population
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the population
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. ( only 14.3) During the period 2000 to 2050, the
percantage
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percentage
 of 0-14
years
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 old
people
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 will decrease slightly. ( From 14.3 to 11.5%)
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, there will be
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increase
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an increase
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 in the
percentage
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 of 60+ old
people
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for
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in
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 both countries.
Furthermore
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, the
percentage
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 of 0-14
years
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 old
people
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 will decrease in Italy and
Yemen
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, people, yemen, percent, years, percentage, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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