You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you are selling the television. • Describe the television. • Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Hi Ram,
I hope you are living your life at the best and enjoying your work.A few weeks ago, when I met, you were searching for a
television
for your apartment and I believe that search is still in progress.
If you are interested, then
I can sell my television
to you because I am migrating to a new province and it will be difficult for me to carry that television
along with
my luggage. It is a 64-inch Sony Bravia LED smart television
where not only you can watch on-air channels but also
have the capability to connect to the internet and play OTT applications like Netflix, Amazon Prime, and YouTube.
Due to
Christmas month, My employer has given me work from home so I will be at my home and you can visit any time so as to see the functioning of the television
and if you like it then
we can finalize the deal and even help you shift to your place.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
AjaySubmitted by sharma.ajaykumar2309 on
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coherence cohesion
The letter could benefit from a more organized structure, where each paragraph focuses on a specific point: reasons for selling, description of the TV, and a proposed date to view it to enhance clarity and logical structure.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are casual but not entirely in line with the semi-formal nature of the task. Consider using a more formal greeting and closing for consistency with the transactional nature of the letter.
task achievement
The response covers all points required by the task, but more detail could be offered about the television's features and a clearer suggestion for a viewing date, enhancing task achievement.
task achievement
The tone of the letter occasionally switches between casual and semi-formal, which could be confusing. Aim for a consistent semi-formal tone throughout the correspondence for suitability.