You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask you for the opportunity to stay in a college Hall of Residence during my study at ABC College for the upcoming semester.
It would be great if you could provide me with a single room in the dormitory.
Moreover
, a Shared bathroom is not a problem for me, and I prefer to be able to cook sometimes. It would be great if the accommodation provides
me with staple amenities as well.
I am vegetarian, Wrong verb form
provided
hence
, It is important for me to ask if there is any vegetarian cuisine available on the dorm's menu. Furthermore
, you should consider that I am allergic to eggplant and nuts.
I hope you can help me to find the proper accommodation in the college Hall of Residence. However
, I would like to ask for alternative options, if there is no room available.
I am looking forward to your prompt answer.
Yours faithfully
Ali ASubmitted by ali on
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coherence cohesion
You have established a clear structure with a proper introduction, body, and conclusion. This helped maintain a logical flow throughout your letter. To further enhance it, consider linking ideas and paragraphs with a wider variety of transitional phrases.
task achievement
Your task response is comprehensive, covering all the requirements mentioned in the prompt: accommodation needs, food requirements, and inquiries about alternatives. To improve, ensure you expand on each point by providing more specific details or examples where possible.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of your letter are appropriately formal, reflecting a suitable tone for the context. To refine your writing even further, vary your sentence structure and vocabulary to enhance readability and engagement.