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Do you think that place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with example.

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One of the most hot-buttoned topics in some fields of study is whether
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 childhood environment of a
person
 can affect one's future achievements. The way I see it,
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the
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 place where a
person
 was brought up has definitely an influence on his accomplishments later in his
life
. I base
this
 opinion on two major reasons. First of all,
this
 matter can be viewed by using
bigger
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 lens or bird's point of
view
. What I mean by a bigger lens is that we can see it on a large scale with the whole village or community as the "place of living". Here, a
person
 grew up interacting with people from different walks of
life
, absorbed the culture and nature surrounding him, and
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with
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 specific
problem
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 where it could be different to any other
places
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 on Earth. These people he was interacting with more or less could shape his behaviour, views towards the meaning of
life
 and motivation regarding future opportunities.
For example
, if a
person
 lived in a well-off neighbourhood with supportive residents, he could be more motivated to grab opportunities ahead.
However
,
this
annot
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cannot
be
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 the only factor.
Thus
,
this
 leads to the second lens. The second
view
 is the more minuscule
view
 as small as a family. A
person
 cannot be motivated if his family
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 provide the materials and motivation he
needed
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. In conclusion,
this
 should be seen case by case and not be seen in general. We should see it in a family
view
 and in a larger
view
 as larger as the whole community during one's childhood
life
.
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