The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country.
The line graph provides information about the openings and closing of shops in a particular
country
from 2011 to 2018.
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Overall
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it is clear that
in 2011, the figure of newly opened Linking Words
stores
exceeded the number of shop closures, Use synonyms
while
in 2018, a greater number of Linking Words
stores
were shut down in the Use synonyms
country
.
In 2011, approximately 85,000 new branded outlets opened, Use synonyms
while
62,000 shops were closed in the Linking Words
country
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in 2012, the number decreased significantly but rose marginally in the next year, and accounted for Linking Words
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However
, there was some fluctuation, but in 2018, around 3,000 Linking Words
stores
were freshly opened.
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In contrast
, more Linking Words
stores
were shut down in the Use synonyms
country
. In 2015, around 9,000 shops were closed, and Use synonyms
this
figure rose significantly in the following year, with approximately 5,000 closures. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the amount remained relatively stable between 2016 and 2017 but rose marginally in 2018, with a Linking Words
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5,000 closures reported.Linking Words
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