The charts below shows the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts reveal how many
tourists
travelled overseas between 1985 to 1995 from Japan and what Use synonyms
percentage
of them chose Use synonyms
Australia
as their destination. They generally indicate that both the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
and Use synonyms
Australia
's share of them increased over the years.
As the bar chart Use synonyms
represents
, the Verb problem
illustrates
number
of Japanese Use synonyms
tourists
grew mildly Use synonyms
within
each year, Change preposition
apply
started
from Wrong verb form
starting
the
vincinity of 4 Correct article usage
a
million
Use synonyms
poeple
to approximately 10 Correct your spelling
people
million
Use synonyms
ones
Correct pronoun usage
apply
untill
1990, with only a little decrease between 1990 and 1991. Correct your spelling
until
Then
, after a Linking Words
consistansy
between 1992 and 1993 at 12 Correct your spelling
consistent
million
people, it began to rise again Use synonyms
untill
it reached nearly 14 Correct your spelling
until
million
Use synonyms
tourists
Use synonyms
at
1995.
In the line chart, it is obvious that the Change preposition
in
percentage
of Japanese Use synonyms
tourists
in Use synonyms
Australia
had a steady rise from 2 per Use synonyms
cent
in 1985 to nearly 5 per Use synonyms
cent
in 1988. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, it had a fall to almost 4 per Linking Words
cent
in 1989, followed by a mild growth to around 6 per Use synonyms
cent
in 1993. After that, it has a little decrease.
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Overall
, the charts show that as the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
from Japan grew throughout the years between 1985 and 1995, the Use synonyms
percentage
of them coming to Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
also
rose. They Linking Words
also
reveal that Linking Words
although
the Linking Words
number
of passengers and the Use synonyms
percentage
of them in Use synonyms
Australia
had little fluctuations, it was generally increasing.Use synonyms
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