The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Looking at the chart , the rate of three different crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005 can be observed. What is noticeable,is that car thefts were the most common over a 35-year timeframe,
whereas
street robberies were rarely committed.
To begin
with, from 1970 to 1990 the level of car theft increased more than twice from 0.40 to 1 million
,followed by dramatic growth to1,6 million
in 1995. However
, the rate declined sharply and in 2005 indicator was similar to that in 1990. In contrast
, robbery was not so widespread,because the chart demonstrates that from 1970 to 1990 it was not committed ,nevertheless
, in 2005 a slight growth can be seen.
Looking more closely, the house burgling commitment rate varied throughout 35 years. For example
, from 0.2 million
in 1970,the digit tripled to 1995, with the following decrease in 2005, when the number was nearly half of a million
.
Overall
, if this
tendency continues ,it will lead to considerable growth in the street robbery commitment.Submitted by amina.ilyuk8 on
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