The map below shows 2 possible sites (S1 and S2) of a new super market planned for the town of GARLSDON

Remarkable information is provided regarding the two possible locations of a new store for the Garlsdon city by the given map. From an

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view, it can be seen that S2 is a better location to build a new supermarket since easier to access. By a closer examination, it is obvious that despite the fact that S2 is in the middle of the industrial zone, customers can use numerous transportation systems to reach there.

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, Bradson and Cransdon’s dwellers can use main roads to commute which are 16 km and 25 km far, respectively. What’s more, people from the countryside can use the railway which passes through the near of the new shop. Turning to S1 which is located in the northwestern of Garlsdon city in the rural area, it can be argued that it is far from the residential area,

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, residents from Cransdon and Hindon can commute either by main road or railway.

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Topic Vocabulary:

site selection
supermarket
residential areas
main roads
public transport
traffic congestion
peak shopping hours
parking availability
suppliers
delivery logistics
amenities
shopper convenience
environmental implications
green spaces
urban development
economic development
job creation
local businesses
market saturation

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The map below shows 2 possible sites (S1 and S2) of a new super market planned for the town of GARLSDON

More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impacts on environment and on people who lost their job because of it.

In some cultures, children are often thought that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

The internet has become so efficient and popular that many people rely on it for learning. Some suggest that it could replace the use of books as the main source of knowledge for education. Do you support or oppose the opinion? Explain your position.