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Youth
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crime
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become more popular in
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

generation. I believe, parenting
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skills
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skill
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skills

It seems that skill may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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are
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is

The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject parenting skill. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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really good
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for
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to
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for

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preventing
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youngsters
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

youngster
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youngsters

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from
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to
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from

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making
Verb problem
committing

There may be a verb use issue here.

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apply
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a
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apply

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crime
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. I
partianlly
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partly

If you don’t want partianlly to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

agree with the statement and in the next paragraphs,
i
Change the capitalization
I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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will explain a few
reason
Change to a plural noun
reasons

The singular countable noun reason follows the quantifier few, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.

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and why.
Firstly
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
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Use synonyms

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

youngster
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youngster'

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first step
learning
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in learning

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is from their
parents
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.
Parent
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A parent
The parent

The noun phrase Parent seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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should educate their
child
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and give
good
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a good

It appears that the phrase good example may not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.

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example
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for them.
Parents
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should have
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the skill
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skill
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skills

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and knowledge to educate their
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Use synonyms

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

child
Fix the agreement mistake
children

It seems that child may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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.
For
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

example
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, at home parent should create good
relationship
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relationships

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with their
child
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and
learning
Wrong verb form
learn

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb learning. Consider changing it.

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what they thinking and
also
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

give good
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

example
Fix the agreement mistake
examples

It seems that example may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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to resolve
the
Correct article usage
apply

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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problem
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problems

It seems that problem may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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. In
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

way,
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Add an article
the child
a child
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Use synonyms

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

child
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children

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can learn from
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

parents
Correct pronoun usage
their parents

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and behave like their
parents
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.
Hence
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
youth
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

crime
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

not only
come
Correct subject-verb agreement
comes

It seems that the verb come does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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from
parents
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, it
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

come
Change the verb form
comes

It appears that the subject pronoun it and the verb come are not in agreement. Consider changing the verb.

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from their
friend
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friends

It seems that friend may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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, and from
movie
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movies

It seems that movie may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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their
Correct your spelling
they are

The word their doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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watching.
Parent
Add an article
A parent
The parent

The noun phrase Parent seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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should
controls
Change the verb form
control

The verb controls after the modal verb should does not appear to be in the correct form. Consider changing the verb form.

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their
child
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from using access
internets
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internet

It seems that internets may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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and
creat
Correct your spelling
create

The word creat doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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good
relationship
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relationships

It seems that relationship may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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with
your
Correct pronoun usage
their

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

child
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child's

It seems that this noun form may be incorrect.

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friend. In
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

way
Add a comma
way,

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase In this way. Consider adding a comma.

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you can guide and learn what their
child
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thinking.
Secondly
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
parents
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

should believe the school to
teaching
Wrong verb form
teach

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb teaching. Consider changing it.

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your
Correct pronoun usage
their

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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childrents
Correct your spelling
children

If you don’t want childrents to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

to become a better
person
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people

It seems that person may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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. At school, they not only
learning
Wrong verb form
learn

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb learning. Consider changing it.

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subjective
Change the word
subjectively

Subjective seems to be the wrong part of speech for this context.

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they
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

teaching
Wrong verb form
teach

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb teaching. Consider changing it.

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your
childrents
Correct your spelling
children

If you don’t want childrents to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

to
decipline
Correct your spelling
discipline

If you don’t want decipline to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

. Teachers
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

should do a camping to reduce
youth
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

crime
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

.
For
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

example
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, invite a
motivation
Replace the word
motivated

The word motivation doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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person to give a
speach
Correct your spelling
speech

If you don’t want speach to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

about
youth
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

crime
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

and the
consciouness
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consciousness

If you don’t want consciouness to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

.
This
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

can help
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

youngster
Add an article
the youngster
a youngster

The noun phrase youngster seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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to open their mindset. In
conclutions
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conclusion
conclusions

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, both patenting and school education is
importance
Replace the word
important

The word importance doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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to
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

youngster
Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters

It seems that youngster may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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to educate them.
Parents
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

should give good
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

example
Fix the agreement mistake
examples

It seems that example may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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for
Change preposition
to

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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thier
Correct your spelling
their

If you don’t want thier to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

kids. Having good parenting
skill
Fix the agreement mistake
skills

It seems that skill may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

improve
Verb problem
helps

There may be a verb use issue here.

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parents
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

to educate
your
Correct pronoun usage
their

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

show examples
Use synonyms
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

child
Fix the agreement mistake
children

It seems that child may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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and
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

can reduce
youth
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

crime
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

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Grammar & Vocabulary
Work on improving your grammar accuracy and range. Frequent grammatical errors and limited lexical resource detract from the clarity and impact of your ideas.
Coherence & Cohesion
Enhance your essay structure by clearly dividing it into paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point. Introduce each paragraph with a topic sentence that clearly links back to the overall argument.
Task Response
Support your arguments with more specific examples and explanations. This helps to strengthen your points and make your essay more persuasive.
Conclusion
Revise your conclusion to more effectively summarize your main points and restate your stance on the topic in a clear and persuasive manner.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • behavioural strategies
  • family relationships
  • communication
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • peer pressure
  • societal issues
  • poverty
  • inequality
  • comprehensive community programs
  • law enforcement
  • legal consequences
  • deter
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