The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.
There are two categories of information on visiting the Ashdown
Museum
. One of them illustrates the number of Use synonyms
people
who went to the Use synonyms
museum
before and after renovation. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the pie charts depict the result of surveys about the level of visitors’ contentment over the same two periods.
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Overall
, the total number of visitors to Ashdown Linking Words
Museum
increased the Use synonyms
year
after refurbishment. It can be implied that the proportion of Use synonyms
people
who did not respond to questions remained unchanged. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the degree of dissatisfaction decreased considerably in the Linking Words
year
after renovation operations. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the figures for Linking Words
people
who were very dissatisfied declined slightly.
In the Use synonyms
year
after refurbishment, the total number of goers to Ashdown Use synonyms
Museum
experienced a significant increase of 18000. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the proportion of Linking Words
people
who were very satisfied rose substantially from 15% to 35% in the same Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, after renovation, the percentage of visitors who were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied fell by 25% and 5%, respectively. It is worth noting that the figure for no response Linking Words
people
was equal to 5% after and before refurbishment.Use synonyms
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