The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The two maps represent the transformation of an
island
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after constructing some tourist amenities.
It is clear that
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there were a huge number of facilities built for tourism purposes including transportation and accommodation in the central and western
island
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,
while
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the east of the
island
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has remained unchanged.
In addition
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, despite a lot of construction, the natural beauty of the
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was preserved. Before the construction of infrastructure, the
island
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estimated at about 200 square meters had only some trees and looked like a wildlife
island
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. It was surrounded by the sea corresponding with a beach in the west for swimming. After that, most of the
island
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was constructed/ converted to become an attractive holiday resort. One of the noticeable points is that the trees stayed in the same position during the development of the
island
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. There was an appearance of a pier to transport travellers by boat
as well as
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vehicle tracks and footpaths to move in the internal
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. The reception was built on the central
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and connected with the restaurant through a short vehicle track. Towards both sides of the reception was the mushroom of two residential areas. There was a footpath leading tourists to the beach to swim
at the end
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of the west.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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