The map shows the change of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994
The map shows the change of a
village
called Chorleywood
between 1868 and 1994.
It is clear that
the transport infrastructure in the village
improved while
the village
grew. There are four periods of developments
shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near Fix the agreement mistake
development
to
the main roads, the motorway or the railway.
From 1868 to 1883, Change preposition
apply
Chorleywood
covered a small area next to one of the main roads. The Chorleywood
Park and Golf Course are now located next to the original village
area. The village
grew along the main road to the south form
1883 to 1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built across the area from west to east. Correct your spelling
from
Chorleywood
station is located in this
part of the village
.
Meanwhile, Chorleywood
continued to expand from the
east to west until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the Correct article usage
apply
village
, and from 1970 to 1994, further
expansion of the village
happened around the motorway intersection with one of the main roads and the railway.Submitted by 27475868 on
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