Nowadays the environmental problems are to big to be manage by individual persons or countries. In other words, it is an internationl problem. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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last
few decades have seen heated
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about how are play
the
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major
roles
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to preserve
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environment
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.
persenallty
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personally
personality
, I am inclined that
globle
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global
issue .
Nevertheless
, I would argue that
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contribute
in
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solving
this
problem. On the one hand , I think that all of the world
suffer
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from
this
phenomenon.
First,
the
globle
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global
globe
should have international law to deter many acts that
enhancing
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pollution
.
For instance
, there are several factories do misbehaviour which
deteroration
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deterioration
deteriorating
environment
and
cause
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air
pollution
,
for example
,carbon dioxide is emitted from
burning
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of fossil fuels ,
also
fossil fuels
such
as natural gas , oil and coal are used in electricity generated for industrial and privet consumption ,
thus
lead to air
pollution
.
Furthermore
, the
authurities
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authorities
in all nations should foster investment in renewable energy and
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projectes
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projects
and behaviours which
revetatising
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revitalizing
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practesis
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practises
environment
’s safe.
On the other hand
, I claim
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population
have
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paramount ways to
concerve
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conserve
conceive
the
environment
.
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, parents and society should
aware
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thier
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their
young on the crucial of
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precerve
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preserve
environment
. In
other word
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, the most practical solution to
this
problem is a
government sponsored
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awarness
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awareness
campaign . an effective advertising campaign could warn of
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the dangers
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dangers
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the dangers
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of
enviromental
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environmental
contamination
such
as air and water
pollution
and
deferostration
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deforestation
and
hopfully
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hopefully
, raise awareness among
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public
via
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organize
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number
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of lectures in
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school
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and private and public
inistitution
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institutions
institution
. Avoid dumping
waset
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waste
products in
place
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places
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outside controlled
landfill
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landfills
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or waste processing
center
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centers
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. In conclusion, I believe that preserving
the
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nature
are require
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combined
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effort from folk and authorities and
globle
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global
countries because the
basic
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of any nation
are
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popullation
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population
populations
.
as
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a
consequences
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, the world should ensure steps are taken to
mitigat
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mitigate
determental
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detrimental
impact of
this
phenomenon to avoid
deterorating
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deteriorating
the future.
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