Nowadays the environmental problems are to big to be manage by individual persons or countries. In other words, it is an internationl problem. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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The

last

few decades have seen heated

discussion

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discussions

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about how are play

the

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major

roles

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role

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to preserve

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in preserving

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environment

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the environment

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persenallty

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personally

personality

, I am inclined that

globle

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global

issue .

Nevertheless

, I would argue that

individual

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contribute

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solving

this

problem. On the one hand , I think that all of the world

suffer

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from

this

phenomenon.

First,

the

globle

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global

globe

should have international law to deter many acts that

enhancing

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pollution

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, there are several factories do misbehaviour which

deteroration

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deterioration

deteriorating

environment

and

cause

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causes

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air

pollution

for example

,carbon dioxide is emitted from

burning

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the burning

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of fossil fuels ,

also

fossil fuels

such

as natural gas , oil and coal are used in electricity generated for industrial and privet consumption ,

thus

lead to air

pollution

Furthermore

, the

authurities

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authorities

in all nations should foster investment in renewable energy and

funding

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projectes

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projects

and behaviours which

revetatising

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revitalizing

revitalising

practesis

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practises

environment

’s safe.

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, I claim

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the popullation

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popullation

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population

have

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paramount ways to

concerve

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conserve

conceive

the

environment

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, parents and society should

aware

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thier

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their

young on the crucial of

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precerve

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preserve

environment

. In

other word

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, the most practical solution to

this

problem is a

government sponsored

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awarness

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awareness

campaign . an effective advertising campaign could warn of

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the dangers

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dangers

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the dangers

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enviromental

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environmental

contamination

such

as air and water

pollution

and

deferostration

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deforestation

and

hopfully

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hopefully

, raise awareness among

puplic

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public

via

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organize

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a number

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number

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of lectures in

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schools

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school

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schools

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and private and public

inistitution

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institutions

institution

. Avoid dumping

waset

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waste

products in

place

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places

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outside controlled

landfill

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landfills

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or waste processing

center

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centers

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. In conclusion, I believe that preserving

the

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apply

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nature

are require

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requires

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combined

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a combined

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effort from folk and authorities and

globle

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global

countries because the

basic

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basis

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of any nation

are

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popullation

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population

populations

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consequences

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consequence

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, the world should ensure steps are taken to

mitigat

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mitigate

determental

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detrimental

impact of

this

phenomenon to avoid

deterorating

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deteriorating

the future.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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288 words

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Nowadays the environmental problems are to big to be manage by individual persons or countries. In other words, it is an internationl problem. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development s other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?