The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.
The diagram indicates the process of making paper and recycling it for
further
usage and all this
is done in eleven stages.
Overall
, the first step starts with using tree cuts such
as pine trees and using several machines and at the end
, paper-making machines along with
adding water.Moreover
,The paper to paper part displays to start with collecting used papers
and using several tools to end up at the same engine the first level does.
As can be observed,they first use thin cuts of trees continued by using de-barking drums to dry and make pieces of the cutten wood.Furthermore
, a thermomechanical refiner would be used. Lastly
,the final result would be placed in the paper-making unit by adding some water to get it in the right shape.In addition
, the recycling part takes the papers
which are not in use and puts those in an after-collection tanker.Nonetheless
, they use a de-inking machine to remove the words and inks in the papers
.Nevertheless
, a tool will be used to clean the screen of it and make it look fine.Finally
, a thermomechanical machine with recycled pulp mix will make things ready for the last
part to create new papers
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