The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The table provides information on the
achieved
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three different types of
medals
across ten different countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games event by god. It is clearly seen that the United States placed the first rank, since they
was
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the highest achievers in all three types of
medals
, predominantly in the
gold
ones. Meanwhile, the reverse was true for Australia, even though they achieved a moderate number of
medals
, accumulatively. In the 2012 Olympic Games, the United States ranked first since they successfully gained by far 46
gold
, 26 silver, and 29 bronze, which
also
drove them to
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the most
olympic
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medals
with
total
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of 104. Following on the second rank was China, which obtained 38
gold
and 88
medals
in sum. Interestingly, Great Britain successfully
occuppied
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occupied
the third rank with 29
gold
, even though the accumulation from all types of
medals
was less than Russia. A similar trend
also
occurred between Germany and France, with only two
gold
discrepancy
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from each other.
In addition
, even though Australia achieved 35
medals
in total, they gained the minimum proportion of
gold
, compared to Italy and Hungary, which equally won eight
gold
.
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