The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table provides information on the
achieved
three different types of Verb problem
apply
medals
across ten different countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games event by god.
It is clearly seen that the United States placed the first rank, since they was
the highest achievers in all three types of Change the verb form
were
medals
, predominantly in the gold
ones. Meanwhile, the reverse was true for Australia, even though they achieved a moderate number of medals
, accumulatively.
In the 2012 Olympic Games, the United States ranked first since they successfully gained by far 46 gold
, 26 silver, and 29 bronze, which also
drove them to had
the most Wrong verb form
have
olympic
Change the capitalization
Olympic
medals
with total
of 104. Following on the second rank was China, which obtained 38 Add an article
a total
gold
and 88 medals
in sum. Interestingly, Great Britain successfully occuppied
the third rank with 29 Correct your spelling
occupied
gold
, even though the accumulation from all types of medals
was less than Russia. A similar trend also
occurred between Germany and France, with only two gold
discrepancy
from each other.
Fix the agreement mistake
discrepancies
In addition
, even though Australia achieved 35 medals
in total, they gained the minimum proportion of gold
, compared to Italy and Hungary, which equally won eight gold
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