The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum duringthe year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show theresult of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visitduring the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table presents data about the visitor counts of Ashdown Museum annually a year prior to and after it was reconstructed,
while
the chart illustrates the outcome of the questionnaires and whether they were satisfied with their experience during the same two timelines.
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it is clear that
the gallery attracts more guests after being renovated, with those satisfied groups becoming the most common ones. Linking Words
However
, previously, the majority of the clients were disappointed with it.
Looking at the details, there are 74,000 individuals who came to the collection earlier. Linking Words
Moreover
, 40% and 30% of them were unsatisfied and immensely displeased during the survey conducted, respectively.
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Subsequently
, in terms of following the renovation, with an additional 18,000 visitors compared to the previous one, the questionnaire discovers that a third-quarter of 92,000 people are delighted with the exhibits, of which 35% are very enthusiastic. Linking Words
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number left 25% of the proportion for those displeased.Linking Words
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