the graph below show the population of turtles from 1980 to 2012.

the graph below show the population of turtles from 1980 to 2012.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the graph below show the population of turtles from 1980 to 2012.
The given line graph illustrates how
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turtles
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lived in India over a period of 32 years between 1980 and 2010. Units are measured in index.
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, it can clearly be seen that the amount of all turtle
species
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is steady throughout the given period.
However
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, if we look closer at the graph, Olive Ridley
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experienced a moderate rise over the years meanwhile the other two
species
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fell from 1980 to 2012. In terms of the
species
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which has increased, the population of Olive Ridley
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started at precisely 100.
Then
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, the
species
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went up significantly to around 135 in 1997 before facing fluctuation from 1998 to 2011. In 2012, the number of
turtles
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hit a trough at approximately 130. Regarding the other two varieties with less number, both Green and Leatherback
Turtles
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stood at exactly 100 in 1980, similar to Olive Ridley
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. Green
Turtles
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reached a peak of just below 110 in 1982 and from
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point onwards, the
turtles
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decreased slightly from around 100 to roughly 90 in 2012.
In contrast
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, Leatherback
Turtles
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had a dramatic escalation to just above 110 in 1987.
Thereafter
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, the
species
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drastically dropped and settled at its lowest point
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just under 60 in 2012.

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