The bar chart illustrates the amount of hours that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists used per day to do 3 activities
The image compares the total
time
tourists
spend from 4 different countries on three different activities, including visiting places
, reading books, and at the beach.
In general, tourists
from 4 different countries spent most of their time
at the beach or reading books. Visiting places
is the minor favorite
thing among these Change the spelling
favourite
tourists
.
During the holidays, Chinese and American tourists
spent most of their leisure time
reading books, accounting for 8 and 5 hours
, respectively. On the other hand
, tourists
from Turkey and Brazil spent their holiday mainly at the beach, accounting for 6 hours
and 5 hours
respectively.
All tourists
from 4 different countries spent the least of their leisure time
visiting places
with only 3 hours
or less. In more detail, Turkish and American tourists
spent 3 hours
on average for this
activity. Furthermore
, tourists
from Brazil spend 2 hours
visiting places
, meaning tourists
from China only allocate an hour for this
particular activity.Submitted by giskaayprd on
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