The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Those two pie charts depict information about the marriage
status
of the citizen in Canada
and in Australia
.
To begin
with, it is shown that both countries had similar percentages for their highest rank of marital status
, which is separated but not divorced with 53 per cent in Canada
and 41 per cent in Australia
. Similarly
, the second lead for those two states were
Change the verb form
was
also
the same, fell
into married people accounting for 29% (Wrong verb form
falling
Canada
) and 46% (Australia
). In addition
, there is another similar number of
percentage for Correct quantifier usage
apply
divorced
in Replace the word
divorce
Australia
and Canada
, approximately 2% and 1%. Whereas
for
widowed and never married had a similar number in Change preposition
apply
Canada
, just only 7 per cent both, whilst in Australia
just over 6% and 5%.
However
, there is a marital status
that Australia
doesn't have, thus
only belongs in Canada
, which is the
same-sex marriage. Even though not the highest nor the lowest, that Correct article usage
apply
status
has a percentage of 3 percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
Canada
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Vocabulary: Replace the words status, canada, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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