The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart beside illustrates approximate
illiteracy
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rates
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in the world, divided by region and by gender, in a specific year. The figures in the vertical axis are in percentage. The male and female sections are represented by the colours blue and purple, respectively. The horizontal axis shows the regions.
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, South Asia has the highest
rates
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of
illiteracy
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,
whereas
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Developed Countries have the lowest, for both genders. Most
women
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in Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa do not know how to read and write properly. In all areas,
women
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have higher
illiteracy
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rates
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than men. Men from Latin America and the Caribbean have
illiteracy
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rates
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below 10%,
while
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women
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have
rates
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not over 20%. Males from Sub-Saharan Africa present almost three times more
illiteracy
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than males from Latin America and the Caribbean. The highest difference between men and
women
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is in Arab States,
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the lowest is in Developed Nations. There is a huge difference in literacy when we compare region and gender around the planet.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, rates, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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