The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The diagram provides information about the changes that Ryemouth village has undergone since 1995 to the present.
Overall
,
it is clear that
several developments have been made to Ryemouth including the increase in the number of accommodations and facilities. In 1995, located in the south was the sea with a fishing port and a large fish market. Nearby it was a cafe. There
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5 shops on the other side of the road.
Moreover
, a hotel was situated right in front of the cafe, and behind it was the forest park, which was next to the farmland. To the north-west of the map was a small town with a total of 12 houses, located near the main road that runs from the coastal road. Turning to the other map, one of the most noticeable features is the development of the housing; two houses were added to the place.
While
the hotel and the cafeteria remain unchanged, the car park was built next to the hotel.
In addition
, the farmland was replaced with a golf course and the forest, which used to be next to the farmland, was cut down and turned into a tennis club.
Similarly
, the shop and the fish market were replaced by 5 restaurants and apartments.
Finally
, the fishing port was removed.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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