The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The graph illustrates the average monthly fluctuation in the prices of copper,
nickel
, and zinc metals
in 2014.
Overall
, Nickel
began with the highest percentage of income but ended with the lowest. Additionally
, zinc started with the smallest change and ended with the highest, and copper prices also
fluctuated during 2014. Prices for all three different metals
dipped in June.
Taking a closer look at the first month, January, the price of nickel
was at the top of the graph; however
, as the months went by, in June it dropped. Moreover
, when we look at the other metals
, they were also
the same as nickel
; they both fell in the same month. During July, they were both stable until October. In October, nickel
and zinc rose again until November. Despite a slight increase in copper from November to December.
As a result
, all metals
fluctuated over the 12 months. Even though the changes in the graph were negatively rising and falling until October or November, the metals
began to rise.Submitted by haticecoza on
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