An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your English studies are going. Write a letter telling your friend about your progress. In your letter say what progress you are making describe the study methods and any materials you are using say what you find most difficult
Dear Sumit,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to share my feedback about English coaching.
You know, I am doing IELTS to get admission, in Canada. So, my requirements are 8777 bands in this
exam which is very hard to achieve without coaching. Thus
, I am getting online classes from E2. Now, my progress is good from last
month.
This
website explains all modules in brief and gives the feedback after mock test which is held every Saturday. For reading and writing, I always prefer to read books, novels, newspapers, and magazines which helps to increase vocabulary and pronunciation and helps me understand different writing styles.
I always do online talk with overseas people, this
trick builds up my confidence and fluency. Also
, I love watching movies in English, and this
habit my listening skills.
But, I do not like reading because sometimes I feel tired and get bored with long paragraphs and all have to be completed in a given time which makes it impossible to concentrate. And, I have migraine problem, so the doctor gives an advice not to do any work which requires a long time to focus. However
, I have to crack this
test on the first attempt.
If you have any ideas about any module, then
send me.
Waiting for a prompt response from your side regarding this
matter.
Yours lovingly,
RamanSubmitted by harmandeep51075 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider organizing your paragraphs to focus on a single idea. For instance, one paragraph can be dedicated to your progress, another to your study methods, and another to the difficulties you face.
Task Achievement
Pay attention to sentence structure and variety, as it can improve your writing style and make it more engaging.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriately placed and well-expressed, establishing a friendly tone.
Task Achievement
You provide a detailed response to the task, addressing all required points such as progress, study methods, and difficulties.
Task Achievement
The tone of your letter is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend, which makes it engaging and personal.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.