Some people think living in a big city is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that the migration ratio has
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increased around the world, and
as a result
, numerous
people
have invasion to cities. Some believe that living in town causes detrimental effects on
people
's well-being. I strongly agree with
this
statement because it brings mental disorders and deadly
diseases
.
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, living in big cities causes pollution by increasing the number of private vehicles and it causes some deadly issues of breathing unpolluted air
such
as respiratory problems, heart stroke, heart attack and lung cancer.
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recent report released from Japan,
people
who live in industrial areas have more suffered and
affected
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lung
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cancer as compared to rural residents. Needless to say, citie's residents have more chances
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deadly and chronic
diseases
along
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their death ratio
also
increased.
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,
mental
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disorder is brought
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living in a big town because of poor housing facilities and
increasing
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the
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number of
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.
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means
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faces overpopulation issues, so
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suffer
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from unemployment
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,
consequently
, they can suffer mental illnesses namely stress and depression.
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, there are plenty of mental counselling clinics
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opened in metropolitan places rather than rural ones.
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, a better lifestyle in towns can not provide peace to the population
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public's
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health is being affected badly. In conclusion, living in a metropolitan location brings more
diseases
like mental disorders and deadly
diseases
because of overpopulation, unemployment, poor housing facilities and pollution.
Therefore
, I completely agree with
this
statement because
people
who are living in industrial areas can be affected detrimentally.
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