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The pie chart below show the percentage of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie chart below show the percentage of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.
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The diagram demonstrates information about
proportion
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the proportion
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 of various types of
books
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 which
was
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were
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 sold by a bookseller from 1972 to 2012. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, adult fiction and children’s fiction accounted for the highest figures throughout the
examine
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 period.
In addition
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, except
from
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for
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 those kinds, the remaining ones experienced
decrease
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a decrease
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 during
40-year
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a 40-year
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 period.
To begin
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 with, both stories for
adult
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adults
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 and children
initially
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 stood at 20% in 1972 and increased gradually to 25% and 22% respectively in 1992. After that,
while
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 the former one witnessed a sharp growth, with the rate ending up at a peak of 45%, the
letter
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latter
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one
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went up by only 3% and stayed at 25% in 2012. To continue with, the percentage of biography
books
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 declined moderately from 20% to 15%;
however
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, that of travel climbed slowly to 18% in 1992.
Following
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this
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, both biography and travel
books
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 saw a dramatic slump, which constituted
at
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8% and 15% respectively in 2012. Meanwhile, other types of
books
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 plummeted significantly (at 12%)
in
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between 1972 and 2012.
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