The pie chart below show the percentage of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie chart below show the percentage of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.
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of various types of
books
which
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sold by a bookseller from 1972 to 2012. Looking from an
overall
perspective, adult fiction and children’s fiction accounted for the highest figures throughout the
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period.
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those kinds, the remaining ones experienced
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during
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period.
To begin
with, both stories for
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and children
initially
stood at 20% in 1972 and increased gradually to 25% and 22% respectively in 1992. After that,
while
the former one witnessed a sharp growth, with the rate ending up at a peak of 45%, the
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went up by only 3% and stayed at 25% in 2012. To continue with, the percentage of biography
books
declined moderately from 20% to 15%;
however
, that of travel climbed slowly to 18% in 1992.
Following
this
, both biography and travel
books
saw a dramatic slump, which constituted
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8% and 15% respectively in 2012. Meanwhile, other types of
books
plummeted significantly (at 12%)
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between 1972 and 2012.
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