The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
The presented chart and graph illustrate the
number
of individuals both sexes, who took part in the Olympics
between 1924 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number
of participants rose dramatically over the given time frame. Additionally
, men
took part in the Olympics
more than women in all mentioned years.
In detail, around 3 thousand people entered the Olympics
which
most of them were Correct pronoun usage
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men
, while
in
almost 50 years later, about 45000 males participated in Change preposition
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this
event and only 5 hundred of them were females. What can be concluded from the charts is that, in 1984, compared to 1952 number
of participants went up to more than 6000 which 5000 of them were men
. Furthermore
, by 2012, the Olympics
constituted the highest number
of participants with females accounting for around 5000, which was the peak of all in
almost a century ago, Change preposition
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while
about 6000 of them were men
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