The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational 

books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting 

and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given line graph compares the amount of
the
Correct article usage
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sales
books
in different categories during a four-year period since 2002 in one country.
It is clear that
although
people bought
less
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fewer
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educational
books
, children’s
books
had the largest amount of
sales
in the corresponding period.
It is clear that
children’s
book
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books
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experienced a sharp increase from just above 3
million
dollars
in 2002 to well above 50
million
dollars
in 2006.
On the other hand
, adult fiction and educational
books
had a vice versa trend from 2002 to 2006. Adult fiction experienced a moderate decrease in
sales
from approximately 45
million
dollars
in 2002 to just under 40
million
dollars
in 2003.
However
, educational
books
grew in
sales
from roughly 25
million
dollars
in 2002 to just above 30
million
dollars
in 2003. After some fluctuations, these two categories reached together and educational
books
overtook adult fiction eventually in 2006 at just above 30
million
dollars
.
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