The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given line graph compares the amount of
the
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sales
books
in different categories during a four-year period since 2002 in one country. It is clear that
although
people bought less
educational Correct quantifier usage
fewer
books
, children’s books
had the largest amount of sales
in the corresponding period.
It is clear that
children’s book
experienced a sharp increase from just above 3 Fix the agreement mistake
books
million
dollars
in 2002 to well above 50 million
dollars
in 2006.
On the other hand
, adult fiction and educational books
had a vice versa trend from 2002 to 2006. Adult fiction experienced a moderate decrease in sales
from approximately 45 million
dollars
in 2002 to just under 40 million
dollars
in 2003. However
, educational books
grew in sales
from roughly 25 million
dollars
in 2002 to just above 30 million
dollars
in 2003. After some fluctuations, these two categories reached together and educational books
overtook adult fiction eventually in 2006 at just above 30 million
dollars
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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