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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
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The line chart illustrates the accounts of
waste
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 produced by several companies during the period from 2000 to 2015. It is noticeable that only
Company
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C
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 increased over a period of 15 years.
By contrast
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, in the end, the
waste
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 produced in
company
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 A and
company
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B
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 decreased between 2000 and 2015. In 2000, the highest
waste
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 generated by
Company
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 A which was reached 12
tonnes
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.
Moreover
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,
Company
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 A can reduce
waste
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production
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 year by year
that was
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,
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 falling from 12
tonnes
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 to approximately
tonnes
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 in 2015.
Furthermore
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, the
waste
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 generation by
company
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B
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 had increased by 2
tonnes
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 in a half-decade. After that, the amount of
waste
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 produced by
Company
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B
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 significantly decreased from closer to 10
tonnes
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 to 3
tonnes
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 over a decade.
Furthermore
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,
company
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C
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 which had lower
waste
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production
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 in 2000 generated closer to 5
tonnes
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.
In addition
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, the
waste
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 generated by
company
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C
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 rose between 2000 and 2015.
Moreover
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, the gap between
Company
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C
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 and
Company
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B
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 was 4
tonnes
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 in 2000 but in 2010, the
waste
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production
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 by
Company
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C
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 and
Company
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B
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 had the same value of
waste
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 generated which was approximately 7
tonnes
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. In 2015, the highest
waste
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production
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 had been replaced by
company
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C
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, c, b, tonnes, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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