The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrate
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books
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males
female
at Burnaby Fix the agreement mistake
females
public library
between 2011 and 2014.
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Public Library
Overall
, it can be seen that number
of Correct article usage
the number
male
reading Fix the agreement mistake
males
books
higher than female
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females
Furthermore
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read
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reading
book
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books
countinuous
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continuously
growth
. But female Replace the word
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are
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starting
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the starting
year
number
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the number
female
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females
higher
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is higher
male
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males
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the final Change preposition
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year
of information depict
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depicts
different
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difference
male
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a male
female
.
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a female
To begin
with, the number
of men reading books
in 2011 was 2500. By following
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the following
year
slightly increased to 4000. Moreover
, in 2013 has significantly grew to 10,000 and to
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the
peaked at 14,000 in 2014.
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On the other hand
, the number
of female reading books
started from 5500 in 2011. In the next year
moderately rose to 8000. Although
to the peaked at 10000 in 2013. But in the next year
reduced to 7000 in 2014.Submitted by kungslowjam on
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