The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The provided line graph below represents the global requirement of four diverse types of materials , namely :
Polyester
,Cotton , Use synonyms
Cellulosic
and Use synonyms
Wool
between 1980 and 2015.
As can be seen from the graph, during Use synonyms
this
period the biggest shift was witnessed in Linking Words
Polyester
. Use synonyms
It is clear that
from 1980 to 1990 the figures for Linking Words
this
material rose steadily and Linking Words
then
fluctuated dramatically until 2000. After these changes , the need for Linking Words
Polyester
increased steeply and by 2015 , It had reached Its peak (70 million tons).
It is Use synonyms
also
worth noting that Linking Words
Cellulosic
and Use synonyms
Wool
were the sole textiles which had changed differently. Quite as much Use synonyms
Cellulosic
as Use synonyms
Wool
was demanded in 2000 (approximately 5 million tons).Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
after
Linking Words
this
period, the data for Linking Words
Cellulosic
experienced a gradual increase , Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Wool
became less popular and had bottomed out at nearly 1 million tons by 2015.
It can Use synonyms
therefore
be concluded that from 1980 to 2015 , Linking Words
Polyester
was much more relevant than other materials . Meanwhile, the statistics for Use synonyms
Cellulosic
and Use synonyms
Wool
were relatively diverse.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words polyester, cellulosic, wool with synonyms.
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