Some people think that tourism is one of the helpful ways to increase a countries state. However, others believe that tourism can only damage traditional rules bringing own affect to a society and cause other troubles. To what extent do you agree with?

In

this

golabilaztion

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globalisation

era, it is easy for

people

travel

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to travel

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around the world, leading to

countries

'

tourism

devlopment

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development

.

Although

some

people

think

tourism

has a negative impact on society and tradition, in my opinion, I believe that developing

tourism

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the tourism

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industry in a country can boost

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the economic

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economic

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economy

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and

incresing

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increasing

the

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apply

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job opportunities. It is undeniable that

tourism

can lead to some drawbacks for local

people

such

as pollution,

enviromental

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environmental

damage, and conflicts

due to

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being unfamilliar

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unfamilliar

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unfamiliar

with local

tradition

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traditions

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.

Construting

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Constructing

a new scenic spot or resort usually

cause

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causes

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considerable damage to

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the enviroment

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enviroment

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environment

, which is inevitable for developing

tourism

.

Additionally

, when lots of tourists

visist

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visit

the scenic, they usually leave many trash and garbage,

pollute

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the area that local

people

live in .

Furthermore

, Tourists coming from different

countries

may

don't

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not be

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familliar

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familiar

with the local

tradtion

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traditions

, causing disrespect for local

people

.

Although

there are lots of drawbacks

of

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tourism

, I personally believe that

advantages

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the advantages

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of

tourism

surpass the

disadventages

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disadvantages

.

Firstly

,

tourism

plays

an

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a

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vital role in economics,

accounted

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accounting

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for

the

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one of the largest proportions in GDP.

Devloping

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Developing

tourism

helps not only

boosting

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economy

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the economy

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but

also

countries

' popularity

to

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all over the world.

Secondly

,

tourism

creates many new occupations in many industries.

For example

, a

language proficiency

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tour guide is needed

in

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for

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tourist

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tourists

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.

Also

, the new restaurant and new hotel need workers . In conclusion,

while

developing

tourism

may cause some negative

effect

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effects

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on

environment

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the environment

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and society, it is pivotal for

countries

to

improving

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improve

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economics,

creating

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create

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job occupations, and

incresing

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increase

popularity in the world.